Thursday, 13 June 2019

fractured fairy tale

In room 5 we have been learning about fractured fairy tales and we had to make a slide show about little red and we had to make one change in the story. Here is the slide show about little red ridding hood.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Annabelle it is Zoe here I like your Little red Riding Hood.

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  2. Hi Annabelle, I love the new ending you created. What a good way to ensure the wolf can not come back and bother them again. I wonder if the fish enjoyed eating him.

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  3. Hi Annabelle I'm Rata from Ahipara school I enjoyed reading your little red riding hood story just add a little more detail to what grandma was feeling when she was swallowed, do that and it will be even more perfect.

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  4. Very cool i like the detail. you could add more to the video and i really liked it.

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  5. Hi Annabelle it Chido here I liked how you changed the story to make it more exciting. I also made one about Little Red Ridding Hood

    By Chido

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  6. hi annabelle very good detail i really injoyed it

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